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BlackWolf
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0 posted 2003-03-02 05:00 PM


Smothered, covered in morbid shells
Where no outlet can be seen,
Highlighted magnificence all above
Except no conception can be deemed,
Hearing the howl of the Wolf
In which I am considered prey,
Boxed inevitably in by the unknown
Until the creature strolled away,
Feeling like a fool was had
I sternly recounted oppositions,
Thinking the Wolf felt also threatened
By way of his own dispositions,
Carrying on with mild days
I cannot forget this lesson,
My ways follow my path
Among the many souls within,
So to does the Wolf,
Sitting adjacent in evolution
Covered by layers of overlay,
With no proof of institution.


© Copyright 2003 BlackWolf - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-02 07:02 PM


Welcome to Passionspoetry.
Wolflover!
Mysterious atmosphere, being both the wolf and the prey ... a fatal attraction!
Margherita

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-02 08:17 PM




BRAVO!!! Cunning, wild, and free as can be, you are the wolf, so follow your destiny and let the road before you lead to many promises ahead! This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, this is spiritually uplifting, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet BlackWolf, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet BlackWolf, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BlackWolf
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3 posted 2003-03-03 06:12 AM


Angel,
Thanks so much for the card, it was very thoughtful of you. And I hope to share great poetry with you in the days to come.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-03-03 11:11 AM



Yep, I've decided, I AM going to enjoy
reading your work.

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-03-03 12:13 PM


Loved this sly look within and without, cunning and clever.
WELCOME! I think I'm going to enjoy your POV.

Nan
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6 posted 2003-03-03 12:23 PM


Very nice, BlackWolf...
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-03-03 01:21 PM


awesome write!
suthern
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8 posted 2003-03-04 11:51 AM


I enjoyed this very much... welcome! *S*
Martie
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9 posted 2003-03-04 11:57 AM


Black Wolf..Interesting and well done.  Welcome to Passions!
Marshalzu
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Lurking
10 posted 2003-03-04 11:58 AM


Welcome to PIP, a great first post, thanks for sharing
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2003-03-04 12:05 PM


BlackWolf
Welcome and I enjoyed the dialogue.

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
12 posted 2003-03-04 12:15 PM


Very nice first post, looking forward to reading more.
Jason

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-03-04 02:39 PM


Welcome BlackWolf! - I will continue too look for your writing - very nice indeed xxoo
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2003-03-04 03:30 PM


Oooh I do love your style!
Welcome to Passions...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
15 posted 2003-03-10 06:41 PM


Enjoyed this.
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