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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-02 04:33 PM



We dance before the moon.

Naked in all but our
desires -

And these...we use to
cloak ourselves.





© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-03-02 04:33 PM


MMMMMMMMMMMM
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-03-02 04:38 PM


Nice writing...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-02 04:38 PM


Ooooh Myyyyy!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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4 posted 2003-03-02 05:10 PM


Powerful, in such few words.
Sandra

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
5 posted 2003-03-02 05:19 PM


Nice write Ericc, I like this, A powerful image in such few words.
Jason

rkcraig
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6 posted 2003-03-02 05:32 PM


Interesting.  I like the idea of cloaking ourselves in our own desires.  Keep em comin
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-03-02 05:34 PM



Good gosh man...
you continue to become even
more brief...

I fear you may disappear!

Please, don't!

Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2003-03-02 06:56 PM


You must have performed in the Garden of Eden!
Stunning!
Love, Margherita

cinnamongirl
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9 posted 2003-03-02 07:26 PM


How very beautiful... you say more in your few, yet well-chosen words than most can say in a thousand. It is of perfect length... too many words cloud the brilliant message, and it gets lost in the fog. In your beautiful expression, the divine message found within sparkles like a diamond touched by moon light.

Thank you... for sharing such amazing beauty.

Love,
Moca

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10 posted 2003-03-02 08:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, what a beautiful way to cloak the spirit with happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) I ove this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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