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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-02 04:03 PM

Jalitseyo

In the beginning
the relationship was so good
I didn't want to let go
of what we had.

Now...
the relationship is so bad
I don't want to hold on
to what we have.

Goodbye.

JamesLee
March02
2003
Jalitseyo means
goodbye in Korean.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-02 04:22 PM

This says quite a bit.
Thanks for sharing this.
Eric

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-03-02 05:28 PM

Short. Sweet? Unique perspective, like it a lot

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-03-02 05:45 PM

James, I read most of your work. I have a hard time, in responding. I hope you are well. I do watch over you. Sunshine

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-02 08:30 PM

Thank you Eric, Craig and Sunshine for the nice responses...
Yes Sunshine things are fine...I am strong...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-02 10:58 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I am so sorry to hear things are not working out well, dearest friend, I send hugs your way though it is all for the better if you are not satisfied and have the courage to let go, I send my thoughts your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-03-02 10:59 PM

heart hugs.....peace
Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-03-02 11:54 PM

Oh no. Need a big Passionate hug?

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-03-03 12:02 PM

Sorry you lost an answer, But I love your poem.Love when a poet jumps languages to be heard.
Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-03 02:32 AM

James - can you please write a letter like that for me? Quickly . . . well put xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-03-03 02:37 AM

Those two little words are easier said than done, but sometimes it's for the better and for worse.

Hugs to you~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-03-03 06:01 AM

Thank you Noah, Greeneyes, Midnitesun, Jason, littlewing and Blues Serenade for the nice responses...
This was easy to write but hard to go past that step...I wrote it January 01 and now I'm just getting the nerve to post it?
And enforcing the words...now thats a task.
But of course this is a process that I'm going through and it will take its natural course and a plan of action will follow the thoughts...James

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

12 posted 2003-03-03 09:25 AM

Goodbye means hello for the right woman
hugs and well wishes, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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