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By moonlight |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I saw her best by moonlight under moonlight i kissed her hair by dawn the memories had faded and i long to find her there I held her close by moonlight And we danced till the demon dawn I watched her slowly vanish Until she was utterly gone I wait for her by moonlight But i know she will not come She watches me by moonlight and laughs at love gone wrong she is the moonlight siren And im lost beyond the throng I will not see her by moonlight And my heart no longer goes on Take a good look at my face Well, don't my smile look out of place look a little closer its easy to trace The tracks of my tears [This message has been edited by Walter Poe (03-04-2003 07:02 AM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed this sad, but love filled write. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh paul, this is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, keep looking to the moon and soon your love will come crooning to your heart and shine like Lady Luna! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...very sad... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw her best by moonlight under moonlight i kissed her hair by dawn the memories had faded and i long to find her there I held her close by moonlight And we danced till the demon dawn ====================================== a melancholy masterpiece poet Paul.. sad but tender rhymes.. so good to get to read you again.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Walter, even though this is sad, it is beautifully written. I liked it....  heart hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-03-2003 09:43 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walter...lovely... thank you... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sad romantic longings. I can relate, as I'm sure so many can. Deb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sadly beautiful. Margherita |
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