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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-02 11:36 AM


When your lips
Sweep across mine
With fury of passion
I feel alive

When you caress
My face
And stare
Deep into my eyes
I feel alive

Every time you say,
"You're beautiful.
I love you."
I feel alive

When we hold each other
Late at night
And act like
We never want to let go
Of each other
I feel alive

When we make love
And we feel
Like we could never
Stop
I feel alive

I'm alive
Because of your love
My sweet
Charming
Prince

Cold hands means a warm heart

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-03-02 11:41 AM


its good to live, isn't it
beautiful

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-02 04:27 PM


Wonderful!
Eric

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-02 04:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
4 posted 2003-03-02 04:43 PM


Makes me feel alive
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2003-03-02 06:35 PM


I love you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2003-03-02 06:40 PM



Julie,
the key image
to this lovely piece
was
"I feel alive"...

realism, acquired.

Good!  Very good!


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-02-2003 06:42 PM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-03-02 07:06 PM


Love this Julie...
Love the feeling also.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
8 posted 2003-03-02 07:13 PM


Yes that's the secret to feel alive ... someone to share this life with ...
beautiful.
Margherita

vandana
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9 posted 2003-03-02 08:03 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-03-02 09:33 PM




(smiles) I too know this feeling, dearest friend, and I long ever so much to feel this way for real with a love who will really want to be with me! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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