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Morning Blues
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Morning Blues |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Morning Blues A welcome sight, she says to me. Each day she waits to see me rise, wondering if my thoughts would pair with hers, as she looks in my eyes. The fogged up mirror, steamed in moist belies the strength of heart, reflect. Disheveled from the nighttimes twist when dreams once held, now disconnect. I watch for shadows, yours and mine, replaying fantasies mistakes. I test the waters, tepid feel halfheartedly sustaining, aches. She leans in closer, meets my touch, fingers tracing lines of stress. Each syllable she whispers soft, echoes back in fond caress. We miss the words he use to serve, a morning's meal to fill the need. We hunger now, for lack of eyes on morning blues, we use to feed. The smile is there, though slighter now, tilted, wondering if you see reflections in your mirror, musing fantasies, in blue of me. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked the imagery. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh WOW, this is amazing, beautiful.. I love it! though it makes me ache a little. In the mornings after I remind myself to breath and realise I have to move.. my thoughts are "not another day!" but its not all bad I suppose.. there still is a tilted smile :-) Enjoyed much! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ Just so totally 'relateable' ..... so VERY~ You're a doll .... ya' know ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I especially liked the last verse and the title you chose. Nicely done and very pretty, as always. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great description of morning blues. Love it. Margherita |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Wow, I loved this! the Wind is invisible. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very pretty setting, as the self heals the self...As always well done my friend. ThisDiamond |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Your poetry speaks for itself. Another great one. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Julie. hugss M GG, yes always a tilted smile *s hiya Marge. Hope all is well with you and your beautiful family. Thank you for relating  BluesSerenade, I am sure you would like the blues. Thank you hugss M Margherita, thankyou for stopping to read and respond. Wind, you are not invisible in my world. ThisDiamond, healing, I never think of that much.*s thanks rkcraig, you make me smile...I feel like you are following me vandana hugss and thanks M There was a run... on poems in mind...the day I wrote this and others |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice, creative, the whole transition to morning, etc. liked a lot |
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