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Seldom Now |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Seldom Now I wandered in a sweep of dreams. In my bed asleep it seems. And there in bright eyed gist assailed The view beyond a mist of Vail. It was a patch of garden green. With daffodils of lively sheen Whose flower seemed to form a dish? Where nectar seemed the sweet of wish? And I imbibed each dish of pour. And drank until there was no more. Floating into ecstasy. Into youthful fantasy And stayed until the end of rend. Till all were weighed and seemed an end And when I woke I was distressed. And whistled what the dream impressed. For I was filled with passions glow Yet at an age they seldom grow. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Seymour! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
now I know how you write these wonderful poems... not only do you dream good dreams (and sleep!.. hmph) but you also get a refreshing flavor of nectar while you're in those dreams. Thanks for the smile, sir  Enjoyed much as always.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thanks for the beautiful. Alyssa, Yep I got a whole bed full of them. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are some days, and then there are Sundays, where I can read each line in whole then in part, and take them in, straight to my heart... hugging you for the lovely slip of poem, Sy... Passions' Passionate guy...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sy! You have wonderful dreams it seems! What a lovely morning read... This one I didn't want to end... ~Tea and hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Dream on,Sy...and kept sharing those revelations with us...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - may all of your dreams be peaceful and filled with smiles. Lovely. Raspberry jam hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Some choose other things, I choose dreams.  Nancy, Hugs back my dear. scorpio Thank you for the well done. Chris, Sweet Chris, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Enjoyed this dream. Daffodils speak of spring, fresh renewed, as sipping their nectar envigorated you. I think if they could speak they'd just laugh out loud...they even look happy....!! And that is how your poetry effects me. Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I imbibed each dish of pour. And drank until there was no more. Floating into ecstasy. Into youthful fantasy And stayed until the end of rend. Till all were weighed and seemed an end And when I woke I was distressed. And whistled what the dream impressed. For I was filled with passions glow Yet at an age they seldom grow. ========================================= I see Randy is influencing your dreams and your pen LOL  And whistled what the dream impressed. I often do the same thing at your poetry. I *winkiewinkie* at them too. *L*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Happy is good. JM, And whistled what the dream impressed. There is a funny in there somewhere. WWRS |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is such a sweet dream.... wish it didn't have to end. Aww, but youthful fantasy is short lived is it not? The good news is we can always dream on. So nice Sy~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-02-2003 12:58 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep sharing dreams, Seymour, maybe I will soon have some of my own |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade You are right and thank you. passing shadows They are waiting just to happen, LOL. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
"...Floating into ecstasy. Into youthful fantasy..." Wonderful words Sy. If only ... Hugs to you, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...I thought that was my dream!  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floating into ecstasy'' no better cloud to float away on..... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I borrowed it, LOL Lauren, I think they call it cloud Nine. Marti Thank you dear. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (03-03-2003 08:05 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Seymour, it is saddening to wake out of a dream that seems heavenly, I experience this heartache almost every single night! (sad sigh) Know you have many dreams inside you and if you keep true to your heart, they can always come true and it doesn't matter how many years go by, you are forever young! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, That is true, but a little carried over. LOL |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
ahhhh the dream state! This is simply excellent, Sy! I so admire your talent, Cher Poetry is: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet Thank you sweet poet. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAAWWWWW, Seymour. You are so sweet. I love the way you tell us of your dreams, and hope that you will forever have them.... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T. ~ I enjoyed this very much, but could you explain the last line to me? tehe ~ May you arise to every occasion--and may the occasions occur often--be ye awake--or asleep! (Whoops! My halo just slipped!) tehe Have a wonderful day--and night! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well it has a double meaning. I think that is all I should say. LOL |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is a wonderful peice of writing, it sent shivers down my spine when I read it. Thank you for sharing it with us Andrew |
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