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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-03-02 03:40 AM


I dream of the day,
When everything is out of the way.

No homework,
NO School,
No parents to boss us around,
Just you and me...

Arm and arm
we walk together,
side by side,
What a wonderful brother....

Some days we have our ups and some days,

well, our downs..

All i know is that i love you Brother,
With all my heart could love.
Being a big Sister is a very fun deal,
But being your friend also,

Well i can't exclaim for what i feel.

Your my bestest friend, and brother i have ever had,
I hope you feel the same too...

Ashgiel


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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
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1 posted 2003-03-02 03:45 AM


this is sweet its so wonderful to see family so close and caring. I can tell you mean the words you say. You wrote this really well!
Keep loving him

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-03-02 10:58 AM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Amara
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.
3 posted 2003-03-02 12:10 PM


It's nice to see such love between siblings...my best friend lost her big brother when she was 8, and she tells everyone that sisters and brothers are there when nobody else is- even parents!

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

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4 posted 2003-03-02 11:02 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a very fiving heart and your brother will always be lucky to have you as his sister! (big hugggssssss) This truly brought a tear to my eye, sweet friend, for one so young you shine with much love and incredible poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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