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Comfort Zone |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Your tangible smile is like a drink from the lake a welcoming please that quenches my thirst. An impossible delight smooth on my tongue a slow sipping tease that cools off my lips. Swirling with passion satisifying and damp liquefies my desire and goes down too easy. You're a blessing in disguise my friend and my foe my equalizer my darkness told. You're my falling star in the midnight sky the light in my eyes that links me to heaven. My intimacy in a whirlwind the bottom line that holds me still. You're the longest day a dreamless sleep my comfort zone my silent keep. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-02-2003 12:15 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! This is beautiful! Someone must have a great liplock on you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori..this is oh so lovely. I wanted to thank you personally for the beautiful reply you left on my 15,000th post. I was deeply touched and moved by your words. It was a very kind gesture. What a loving heart you have! Thank you so much. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a blessing, does he know? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written, Lori!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I want to thank all you nice ladies out there for reading me, I appreciate it very much. Kacy~ Leave it to you to come up with that.  *funny girl* Mind your own business Michele! (just kiddin' ya honey) Nancy~ Thank you, that's special! Martie~ It's my distracton! more like an optical illusion. Hugs~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-02-2003 12:34 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hi Lori, Tsk, at your optical illusion... This is wonderful. I especially liked the falling star stanza and the last stanza. But entire poem reads well and makes me wish I had one of those...smiling here. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very, very nice write. An enjoyable read. Ed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know youre kidding, i have enuf of my own crazy crap going on anyhow, one more bounce up for u |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Pat~ Had one of what? A cool drink! Oh you mean a comfort zone? Well I just made that up! ha! Thank you very much for leaving your comments for me. Morning Wranx and thanks for enjoying my sweet sip! Michele~ I knew that you knew...hugs for that and for the bump up. Happy day to you. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-03-2003 01:27 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is one satisfied poem. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thirst is meant to be quenched, so I over compensated. Thanks Sandra~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as your beautiful words always deeply touch my heart and may true happiness always sing and comfort your soul! (kiss on cheek) This is special, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I think its a great honor when two can be the  you speak softly .... lovely lori....  HUGSSSSS ~~~~~~~~~ Lauren~ Take me where the tides start So I can pull you into me [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-02-2003 10:03 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ Thank you for always leaving your kind and encouraging words. I guess it depends on how much a person can afford to give and take, and be willing to compromise. Thank you Lauren~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its nice to find a comfort zone...I have noticed that it is not always my fault if a woman doesn't feel comfortable with me or around me...sometimes it is problems from their side...and also it is very refreshing and valuable to find someone you feel comfortable with and they with you...its almost like there's nothing you can do...either they like you or they don't...James |
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