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Etain
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since 2003-02-22
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The moon...

0 posted 2003-03-01 08:35 PM


The distance is overflowed by the sea,
lost within me
one in front of the other
as if the autumn were painting into you
all my nostalgia,
our breath merge as one
as a hurtful mist
dying silently into the arms
of nothingness,
and I open my arms and dance
like a moon trembling on the water,
quietly, lonely, hidden, disturbed...
I close my eyes and flow
until I get fused into the water.

Sea of autumn, sweet shelter,
you know that into my heart I save forever
all the tears falling from you.
Your are not only sea,
we are one,
with our tears
pouring and pouring love
into the distance.

Etain.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-03-01 09:28 PM


Very nice Etain. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2003-03-03 05:00 PM


Enjoyed...James
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