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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-01 07:19 PM


With you by my side
I can do just about anything

When you look into my eyes
My knees get weak

When you talk to me
The way you do
It makes me happy inside
And makes me weep
From such happiness

When you touch me
I never want you to let go
I want you to hold me
Forever

You are my special love
The one I want to grow old and die with
For better and for worse
Through sickness and health
Your the one I shall ever love
In this life

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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1 posted 2003-03-01 07:31 PM


Those describe what I feel whenever I think about you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-03-01 07:35 PM


Another good poem.  I like the lines:
With you by my side
I can do anything

I truly feel that love is so empowering that you can do anything with that special someone by your side.  But what do you do and here do you turn when they leave you?

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

vandana
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3 posted 2003-03-01 07:50 PM


nice
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-03-02 03:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2003-03-03 12:49 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, I know with all my heart this true love is bound to forever fill your heart and may it always bring promises and health your way! (sigh) I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-03 01:06 PM


very sweet
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