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Open Poetry #25

Life, God, and Love

ben_pelling
Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.

0 posted 2003-03-01 06:57 PM

Is it not known that the strong do the beating
and the weak, as much as they're loving,
Doom comes to those that falls prey,
In this state of imbalancy life goes on...

God has long existed before the creation of the universe,
Since his sacrafice to purify our sins,
Upon our soul, Lucifer have casted an even powerful curse
Impossible it may seem, love & faith is the only way to win

Ask any one, to them, what is love?

In a riddlers point of view,
Who is chosen to answer what others never knew.
Take a stand from above the sky, the stars, and the mountains
And look below the empty sea, look deep below the sea
To feel the things the eye cannot see
While the riddler, disguised as an immortal wind,
Have been speaking in different tunes across the world freely,
As if it was Hermes duty

hope you enjoy this one as much as I did creating it.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-01 07:26 PM

This is awesome. It got me thinking. I like the metaphors and imagery. As Ahmet Zappa would say, "You ROCK!!!!"

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-01 07:28 PM

Enjoyed...reminds me of that old song..."You got to have faith, hope and charity."...James

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-03-01 07:36 PM

Ben, your poetry keeps getting better.

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