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Chrissypooh
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0 posted 2003-03-01 06:51 PM


Outside the snow is falling,
Inside his Harley's calling.
His bike rattles the windows with fear,
The excitement of Spring rings in his ears.

His wife knows he wants to go,
But the snow outside continues to blow.
Months pass by, it's time to ride,
With his darlin' wife by his side.

With the sun on his face, and the wind in their hair,
To my wedding they'll come, with much love to share.



© Copyright 2003 Chrissypooh - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-01 06:56 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I have seen you around the forums for so long and have longed so much for your lovely debut, yay, I am so happy to hear the news, have the most wonderful time, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Chrissypooh, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chrissypooh, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ben_pelling
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2 posted 2003-03-01 06:58 PM


very nice I truely enjoyed reading this over and over again
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-01 07:02 PM



After watching you read and reply for so long..
It is indeed a pleasure to welcome you to Passions!
Relax, make yourself at home, and above all have fun!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-03-01 07:20 PM


Welcome to Passions, Chrissy!  I have seen you reading and posting responses...you're off to a great start!  Enjoy!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Chrissypooh
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5 posted 2003-03-01 07:20 PM


Thank you for the warm welcome.

Christine

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6 posted 2003-03-01 07:35 PM


It's about time you posted an original! THANKS for being around here so much for everyone. Watch the driveway, we have at least two or three Harley riders on this board, and if you let us know the wedding date, you may need an extra guest serving at your reception.
CONGRATULATIONS, on the post and the upcoming wedding.


rkcraig
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7 posted 2003-03-01 07:39 PM


Good first post.  This reminds me of when I was younger and used to live with my friend's mom and her boyfriend.  He was truly a harley fanatic, he looked, talked and dressed the part.  Thanks for stirring up some good memories.
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8 posted 2003-03-01 07:48 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-03-01 07:49 PM


Chrissypooh - awwww, well now, I do believe I know about whom you are speaking of in your first and wonderful poem. Excellent! This is going into my library ... that is, after my hubby reads it. Welcome to the Passion's family!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2003-03-01 07:59 PM


Chrissypooh - would you send some of the snow this way to British Columbia, we can use it. Nice write, and I'll be reading more of yours...

BC

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-03-01 08:55 PM


Wonderful first post, Chrissy!!! I'm glad to see you taking that next step in PIP!!! Well written..

believe in what your heart feels...

Stapleton13
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12 posted 2003-03-09 09:56 PM


about time you wrote
a really good one Christine.
I knew you could right you just needed faith.

Kathi
(scoobys_army)

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13 posted 2003-03-09 10:57 PM


Hugzzzzzzzzzzzzz Chrissy
Very nice debut! Waiting to see some more

Ellen
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14 posted 2003-03-09 11:30 PM


Beautiful write, thanks for sharing....
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15 posted 2003-03-10 01:50 AM


wonderful write!
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