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GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-03-01 10:21 AM

Indignantly you spoke to me.
My almost whimpered
Washed out words
Unsteady like my eyes.

I held back tears,
Retrieving fears.
Waiting
For a finished rampage.

But its ok, I’m just
A little girl who’s hurting
In effects of tragedy.
It’s not like
I really mind your yelling
Or demeaning words to me.

I realize its all my fault
Come on, please hold my hand.
I’ll wait for you…
In my own (faults) torture
Underneath my blanket…
Washing away.

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (03-01-2003 10:45 AM).]

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-01 10:50 AM

This is so poingent.
I really felt this deeply.
Eric

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-01 11:07 AM

Eric,
it always feels good, to be felt..understood ..thank you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-01 03:55 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Alyssa, this is powerfully poignant, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send angel hugs your way to ease the heartache! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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4 posted 2003-03-01 03:59 PM

heartfelt writing

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-03-01 10:40 PM

Alyssa,

Gee! Heart-ripping! We never know how much truth or reality is in someone's poetry, but am sending big hugs and a prayer just in case.

Powerful write. Many, many hugs.

Luv ya, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-03-02 12:16 PM

Noah,
thank you, very much. you always offer tender words, aprecciated.

Dixie,
I suppose the heart is the best thing to be felt... right? thanks much

Pat,
I guess I tend to write truth. But that blankets pulled me through many a trial... now if I could just live underneath it....!
thank you for the prayers, big hugs back to you. Love you, too

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (03-02-2003 12:16 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-03-02 12:00 PM

Alyssa~
You write beyond your years ... this has a tender poignancy to it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-03-03 12:36 PM

Marge,
thank you! And if what you say is true... well.. you would too...

Blessings to you.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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