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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-03-01 09:07 AM

From each other’s lips
We drink sweet drops of honey
Life springs from our kiss

Love, Margherita

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-03-01 09:23 AM

Lovely...very lovely.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-03-01 10:38 AM

VERY NICE!
Apparently graphics and photos won't be in the book, but these words stand alone, and offer the reader beautiful imagery.

Magnus

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3 posted 2003-03-01 10:38 AM

Pictured perfection! Well done.

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-03-01 10:51 AM

Beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-03-01 12:07 PM

Managia la miseria! Me come mai, io mai ho visto le tue poesia! Che versi! che passione! Scuza che io non parlo bene piu!

Raffaele

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-03-01 12:36 PM

Margherita
Now that's a sweet one, enjoyed.

Ringo

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Saluting with misty eyes

7 posted 2003-03-01 12:47 PM

Who says you need details to get the story told??
Nice job!!

Ringo

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Saluting with misty eyes

8 posted 2003-03-01 12:47 PM

Who says you need details to get the story told??
Nice job!!

Mistletoe Angel

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9 posted 2003-03-01 02:37 PM

(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is sooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my honeyed vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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10 posted 2003-03-01 02:40 PM

Margherita, I love this poem and the picture. I wish the picture could go into the book, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Margherita
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Eternity

11 posted 2003-03-01 03:31 PM

Thank you all, dear friends, for appreciating my first 5-7-5 syllables little poem ..... truth is it just came out like this and I intended to write a "normal" poem, but then I "saw" the pattern and let it be like this.
I discovered haiku/senryu only here on Passions and I love them.

Ciao Raffaele, io invece ho notato la tua poesia e mi piace! Vai forte. Grazie per il tuo commento.

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced

12 posted 2003-03-01 04:07 PM

yes! very sweet!

Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-03-01 05:43 PM

Grazie, che complimenti. Ti posso domandare come mai scrive cosi bene in englise? Sei nato qui?

Don't mind me everybody just need to practice my italian my grandparents are dissapointed lol

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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

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14 posted 2003-03-01 06:12 PM

Simple and to the point. I like the idea that life begins with one kiss, I feel the same way.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2003-03-01 06:13 PM

I think this is a wonderful example of this style.
Sandra

Etain
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since 2003-02-22

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The moon...

16 posted 2003-03-01 07:13 PM

Sweetness in few drops,
to enjoy like a bee.
Beautiful.
Warm hugs,
Etain.

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-03-01 07:22 PM

Lovely, lovely, lovely. The ultimate love story...James

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2003-03-01 07:56 PM

Margherita - those kinda kisses are special... my vote for this...

BC

Margherita
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Eternity

19 posted 2003-03-01 08:15 PM

Hugs to all of you and thank you for your loving replies ... and votes!

A further exercise for Raph:
L'inglese è la mia terza lingua ...mi piace molto esprimermi in questa lingua, ma a volte mi sento un po' limitata (madrelingua tedesco...)
Love, Margherita

Aenimal
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20 posted 2003-03-01 10:48 PM

Madonna, tedesco italiano e englise?! Io sono lo stesso che quando parlo italiano me senti limitata. Capisco quasi tutti ma non posso parlare biene o scrivere obviously! Graceful in three languages and in poetry amazing.

Raf

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

21 posted 2003-03-02 08:00 AM

Very nice! Both, the poem and the picture.

Nan

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22 posted 2003-03-02 09:24 AM

Nice senyru...

Kellie_Cantrell
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23 posted 2003-03-02 01:11 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

Picture very cool too~
I voted!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Margherita
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Eternity

24 posted 2003-03-02 01:32 PM

Thank you friends ... Nan thank you for confirming me that this can be qualified as a senryu ... I am just trying to get familiar with this traditional Japanese poetry.
Love, Margherita

Poet deVine

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25 posted 2003-03-03 07:23 PM

Beautiful.

BloomingRose
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26 posted 2003-03-09 02:52 PM

How sweet it is! The picture goes great with your poem.
Enjoyed!

Deb

icequeen
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27 posted 2003-03-09 03:14 PM

Stunning... very elegant and lovely. Love the photo too

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Connel

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Florida, USA

28 posted 2003-03-09 03:15 PM

Breathtaking!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

littlewing
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29 posted 2003-03-09 04:00 PM

This is lovely - I have always had a tough time putting so much thought into so few words - you executed beautifully xxoo

Margherita
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Eternity

30 posted 2003-03-10 11:44 AM

Thank you also Poet deVine, Deb, icequeen, Connel and littlewing!
Your kind and generous comments are really appreciated.
Love, Margherita

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