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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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Blind Vision Look at you there I never know what to expect from you Hiding your mind You take what you want, you give nothing Never knowing just what you had Staring back at you from beyond the walls Break down the walls Find the chamber within Holding what you can't see Offering what I couldn't be Knowing it never really meant a thing This is my first submission here. Please be gentle!!! lol |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
I'll be gentle, I promise! Very nice! I'm sort of a newcomer myself...under a new ID, at least. My pleasure to be the first to welcome you to this wonderful place. Happy writing! That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Here's my gentle reply: #**!&##$%!#$!! Wish I'd Written This!!! Darn nice. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
:-) you already know what I think |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
This was a wonderful debut. I am sure you will enjoy it here at passions - our membership is an amazing group of people. Make sure to check your e-mail for a surprise. -majnu |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thank you all... and why am I scared to open my e-mail??? lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice first post, yes! Welcome! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 you are among friends...thanks for coming. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ringo, Welcome to Passions! I do believe you're going to like it here. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-01-2003 07:13 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
that last line really catches the whole piece and stings. Great job I like this. Welcome to the Blue Pages! Wahoo, glad to have you. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hey, a fellow Pennsylvanian! Welcome to passions! A great opening poem Keep them coming! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ringo Welcome and enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed the read.... ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, Ringo!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice first, welcome to Passions...enjoy the ride... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Some visions are never meant to be seen, but are tangible and you know such a gift can be found within the presence of grace! This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ringo, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ringo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ringo, I have already been enjoying reading your replies to other people, and now I've enjoyed reading one of your own poems. I really enjoyed it and hope to read much more of your work. I can tell that you are going to enjoy it here, and fit right in with this big family of friends at PIP.   Heart Hugs  Ethel...garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-01-2003 02:30 PM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice first post keep it up cheers~Every girl has a dream within. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Good first write. I look forward to the second and third and fourth, keep them coming. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ringo - excellent - hehehe I am new too - open your email - funny - Im with you there - everyone is so very sweet here and what beautiful writing you have - thank you xxoo |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Your words tell it all >>phantom poet<< |
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