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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
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Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-03-01 01:03 AM



You teased, you tortured
You stole my love
So many times I asked
If there was a God above
You used, abused
You injuried my face
Made me cry
In my satin and lace
You lied, you cheated
You took all I had
Little did I know
I would be this sad
You loved, you married
Happiness you see
Now I ask myself..
Why not with me?

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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Amara
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East of the moon, west of the sun.
1 posted 2003-03-01 01:08 AM


Ooooh...my sympathies and hugs ( ), if this is a portrayal of your feelings. I guess life's just like that, sometimes. But what doesn't kill us makes us stronger, no? (At least that's we they say.)

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-03-01 01:39 AM


Very good... Makes me want to pull out the box of Kleenex hidden in my desk.
wranx
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3 posted 2003-03-01 01:44 AM


Hey, Dark Kisses!

So nice to see you in open. (Folks here aren't so bad)(not so dark, either)

Liked the write!

~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-03-01 04:20 AM


what comes around goes around...have faith...God handles things His own way
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-03-01 04:45 AM


I know this feeling...why do others find happiness and not me...a hard one to figure out...James
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