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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-02-28 11:40 PM


“DORSAL FROM SHOOFLY JUNCTION”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I know Dorsal from Shoofly Junction,
actually my step dad he is, what a character,
used to come home every night black as coal,
scared the you know what out of mom one
night, he snuck up behind her and yelled boo
as he put his hands around her waist,
he was so black she didn’t recognize him,
why you should have heard her scream, one
could hear her all the way down to Shanty Town;
oh, that’s another coal mining town just down
the road, I can still picture him with a pure
black coal dust face and those beady eyes
peering out, with that smirkly how do you do
smile of his, well heck,
that’s where he spent all his time in those dirty
and dusty coal mines that he worked all his life,
actually he started after he came back from the war,
he’s retired now about 80, but still spry
for his age, treated me right, took me
in when I needed it at the time…

Heck we used to hit the bars up the holler
when we were younger, mom would just
get on him when we got back, of course
I was cruising for you know what, but
we did do some beers together, never
will I forget those times…

One night we came in really late and mom was
flipping mad at the both of us, I snuck in the window
where I was sleeping but Dorsal thought he would
slip in through another one, well anyway he
opened the thing up and scared the heck out of
mom as he was crawling in,
he was always doing that it seems,
anyway she didn’t know who it was, so she hit the
top of that baldhead of his with a cast iron skillet,
all I heard was‘BONNNNG’, it felt like the whole house
vibrated, she said he slid out
that window on the ground out cold, damn, mom
almost killed him that night, wow she’s got a heck of a
swinging right arm with that skillet…

Mom passed away some years ago, and good ole
Dorsal, what a guy he is, married him a younger woman,
tells me there’s nothing like it, heck he’s 80 and
still doing it, wow, that guy is something else, but
good at heart, has that West Virginia sense
of humor, I have to ask him what his secret
is, perhaps that moonshine, I wonder…

There’s many more to be told about
like Moonshine Slim, and Preacher Elisa,
but that’s another story, thought
for now I’d hit up one step dad, just one of
the folk that still live there in Shoofly Junction…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
rkcraig
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1 posted 2003-02-28 11:59 PM


Interesting story.  I look forward to hearing about hte othe people you have mentioned.
Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-01 05:07 AM


Booonk! Wow, could just imagine that!
Very lively story. Great that you have this bond with your step-dad!
Love, Margherita

Martie
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3 posted 2003-03-01 10:48 AM


Enjoyed, as always, my friend!  
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4 posted 2003-03-01 03:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, I just love this story, sweet friend, and I want to hear more about Preacher Elisa and Moonshine Slim too! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, felt like I was there myself, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-03-01 08:23 PM



nice switch in style, serving up a bit of
americana, cant relate, being a newyorker,
but i like this

RSWells
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6 posted 2003-03-11 01:14 AM


Step Dad seems a hell of a man. I'm from "The Burg" and know what a hard life the mines are....amazing he yet lives. Sure give us more Shoofly Junction.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-03-11 01:54 PM


BC, I just loved this. I don't know anything about moonshine, coal mines or shanty towns, so this was fascinating.

Can't wait to read more and more ....

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.

Connel
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8 posted 2003-03-11 03:07 PM


*yawns* Im getting tired.. But this poem boosted me up with energy! lol

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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