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ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28
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Isle of Wight UK.

0 posted 2003-02-28 11:24 PM



I'm standing here, alone in the rain
In my heart there is so much pain
You left me here
Without a care
I loved you
I thought you loved me too
But you didn't love me
We were never meant to be
You tore my heart
Into two separate parts
I hate you very much
And I hated your every touch
I don't ever want to see your face
Before I thought it was full of grace
But now all I see is disgust
You have lost all my trust
So, as I'm standing here, alone in the rain
In my heart there is no more pain

© Copyright 2003 Ben. Pelling. - All Rights Reserved
rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-02-28 11:26 PM


well ben, another good poem.  Your just full of it.  Does it run through your veins or something?  Hard to believe your 14.
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-28 11:27 PM


This reminds me of my ex Greg. Grrrrrrrrrrr...... Well written though. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.
3 posted 2003-02-28 11:29 PM


I am 14 i just have nothing else to do with my life at this time my parents are going thru this break up so i dont get any attention so i make poems to ease my pain

ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.
4 posted 2003-02-28 11:32 PM


and these poems im posting are old ones
i havent done any others because i havent had the patience to do so im moving from place to place now so it's dificult to right a decent poem

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-03-01 05:25 AM


sad
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-03-01 09:14 AM


Your pain is felt! Well done!
Go on writing poems even if it seems difficult now, jot down your thoughts, it will help.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2003-03-01 05:10 PM


A nice expression of your feelings...James
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