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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-28 11:09 PM


I sit here
At this late hour
Worrying about my parents
They haven't called all day
And they said yesterday
They would call me today

I worry
Because they are in snow country
Up in Pennsylvania
How do I they didn't
Get into a wreck

I wish they would call
So my worry
Would be laid to rest
But it is after 11 PM
And they are probably gonna
Come home and go stright to bed

When I get up in the morning
They are gonna get a call
I want to hear their voices
To see if they are still alive

Cold hands means a warm heart

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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-02-28 11:13 PM


Good poem, usually it's flipped around and the parents are worrying about their kids.  I'm sure everything will be o.k.  This just shows that they have a child who cares.
ben_pelling
Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.
2 posted 2003-02-28 11:18 PM


nice one mate
this one truly touched me because my parents have split up recently and i worry about them alot there always on the phone yelling at each other,

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-02-28 11:44 PM


You won't have to worry about me Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-03-01 04:18 PM


that hurts, yea, I know...
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