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vandana
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0 posted 2003-02-28 09:19 PM


I gave you my love
Tonight
The stars are seems
To be on their way
They say
Love is written
On the stars
When you wish upon them
So here Iam
Giving all I can
Wishing the leaves would stay dry
Let me try
To give my heart
Tonight
Now aumtumn Is gone
Winter Is here
To fill your love
In my heart
The leaves were fallen
On the ground
Let the words of whispers calling
I gave you my heart and soul
Tonight
The candlelight glowing
Where all the roses dyning
When the time is here
for me to give my heart and soul
Tonight
Let us pray
for tonight
When love is here
Tonight
I gave you  my heart and soul

[This message has been edited by vandana (03-01-2003 10:28 AM).]

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2003-02-28 09:27 PM


Let the words of whispers calling

~lovely vandana~

I hope he hears this~

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-28 09:32 PM


Oh, Vandana, this is such a beutiful love call. I hope he hears your hearts whisper, too.  
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-28 09:32 PM


This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-03-01 04:24 PM


very romantic writing! loved this!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-01 04:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is a beautiful calling, sweet friend, may love always heed your call and embrace you with smiles and faith! (big huggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-03-01 05:29 PM


vandana one of your best...enjoyed...James
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-03-01 05:32 PM


A pretty write my friend.
ThisDiamond

rkcraig
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8 posted 2003-03-01 06:19 PM


I believe that this is the first poem that I have read of yours; I will look forward to many more.
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