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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-28 04:11 PM

My blood has many tides.

They rise and fall
before you.

You are the moon to this night.

My blood response
in worship.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-28 04:14 PM

Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-28 04:18 PM

(smiles) And you always worship your love with such heart, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I love it! (big huggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-02-28 05:40 PM

"You are the moon to this night."

I like this line.

but not sure I can picture the blood tides (maybe it's just me not understanding)
M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-02-28 08:40 PM

This is so full of passion ....
the magnetism of the moon and its effects on the essence of life.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

5 posted 2003-02-28 10:57 PM

My blood responds like the tides to the moon... responding to a very deep, spiritual love... how beautiful.

I agree- beautiful imagery... amazingly beautiful whisper poem...

Thank you... for the tides, the Moon, and the night sky that you have painted perfectly in my mind. Thank you for the metaphor that rings deeper still in the well of my soul.

Thank you for such a peaceful, lovely poem.

Love,
Moca

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

6 posted 2003-02-28 11:05 PM

I like the idea of you rising and falling like the tide to the other person.

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-03-01 05:26 AM

LOVE THIS!

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