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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-28 03:57 PM


Not The Woman
of My Dreams

As we caress I'm so happy
that I could scream.
Her breasts look and feel exactly
like the ones in my dreams.
Her sleek silky back is
perfectly pristine.
Her shapely rear is
sexy to the extreme.
One time I longed for her
on the back streets of Hong Kong.
Another time I chanced upon her in a
Parisian Club singing romantic French songs.
Tonight a Polynesian beauty kisses me in her thong.
It never matters what position she assumes.
Her excess of sensuality reduces me to a swoon.
As my hand slides down her back her lips whisper go.
I go along for the ride and lust will take control.
My hand lingers where my desires
are focused and clear.
I partake of her feminine magic
in caress of her perfect rear.
She moves in closer and leans into me.
My hand in eager exploration finds the
place where my love desires to be.
No matter how many times I admire her,
or touch her, or kiss her tenderly, it is already
predestined that she won't be that crazy about me.
Each one insist that they want to share their lips
but in the morning I know I will not be missed.
And each one will scream that she's
not the woman of my dreams.

JamesLee
February28
2003

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-28 03:59 PM


That sounds like a perfect dream gone bad. I loved the way you described it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-28 08:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I too have dreams like this and in my dreams I'm desperate enough to just beg a girl to come to me! (sigh) This is poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-01 04:14 AM


Thank you the loner and Noah for responding...actually this is about my relationships...I have met many that I liked on the exterior but as I got to know them it was a disaster...probably my fault as much as there's...my expectations are too high...my relationship skills are too low...James
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4 posted 2003-03-01 04:15 PM


you make me wonder just how many women you've dated...and why you even keep trying...we're all schmucks! Just get a dog...lol
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-03-01 04:43 PM


Thanks for responding passing shadows...I have only dated one woman in my lifetime...I had lots of experiences with her...I just keep changing the names in my writing...actually I'm just joking...in truth I have dated as many as I can...but not everything I write is truth...some is truth and some is fantasy...I don't want a dog and I don't want perfection.  I want a woman...women are fantastic...James
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7 posted 2003-03-02 04:46 PM


hey Shadowy one!  speak for yourself *thwaps ya* LOL

such passion can be bitter in the end James, but one day the "baking chocolate" passionate will be sweet to taste in the end...

KS

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