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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-28 01:54 PM



I wish I could reach your mind
for everytime we speak
it all gets lost
in translation

I wish I could learn
the cryptic language
of woman tongue
but know even then
the rules would of course
change
leaving me foot-in-mouth

So my darling here is the world
now tell me what
that little devious mind
is thinking

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-02-28 01:58 PM


Devious indeed!  We are not giving up our secrets!!

Funny piece.

Susan

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-02-28 01:59 PM


give up,
you'll never get it, nor do we get yours,
but its nice to know you would like to
sneak a peek inside

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-28 02:00 PM


We'll never tell... tehe

Great poem! You have more insight than you may think!

Warm hugs,
EA

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-02-28 02:00 PM


I know thats why I have perpetual foot-in-mouth disease
scorpio
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5 posted 2003-02-28 02:04 PM


Brad, I hesitiant to enter the blast zone...but very insightful write...now just keep your head down..
believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (02-28-2003 02:37 PM).]

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-02-28 03:06 PM


Its hard...but some are better than others...it involves things like listening...not only thinking of them as sex objects.  I'm not that good myself...but I try hard...James
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-02-28 05:53 PM


well... I can tell you that I am NEVER understood, so I must speak a different language than those who try to listen to me.

M

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-02-28 05:58 PM


I'll never tell....
It's all in the eyes...just read her yes.
Cute write...hugs.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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9 posted 2003-02-28 06:07 PM


A smart man you are, Mr. Majors...

I'm adding this to my library.

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2003-02-28 06:41 PM


A great theme...penned with such insight...
Raised a giggle from the depths...
We all think we are clear...when in fact...nothing could be farther from the truth. Do you think it was part of the plan, so as to foster a relationship strong enough to bend around the curves? Wonderful. ThisDiamond

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11 posted 2003-03-01 04:25 PM


you'll never really know...*evil grin*
Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-03-01 04:37 PM


What secrets do guys have, we like sex sports and food and any combination of those. its all you need to know
Kethry
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13 posted 2003-03-01 05:10 PM


Do you really think we'd exchange our thoughts for the world, No! The trade price is not enough!


Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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14 posted 2003-03-02 02:57 PM


I'm easy to understand... really I am
Alright, alright, half the time other women can't even understand me lol.

Too cute

Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend.

Brad Majors
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15 posted 2003-03-03 04:28 PM


thank you
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