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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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dry grass rustles in the wind, endless seas of life, live accross the steppes, where the sun blazes upon a thirsty ground, mountains wisper in the distance, I'll miss it when I leave the Wind is invisible. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the imagery. This is a beautiful poem. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes maam... this is good... good images peeking out at us..and an honest emotion to go with it... where you been? we haven't seen much of you lately..or at least I haven't. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I miss you, when you leave. loved this delicate whisper in the sun. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
just waiting for them to put up my new photo. (I was messing with my new scanner) I'll be a little more active. I'm checking out your poems right now. the Wind is invisible. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wind this is lovely...imagery and emote done in tight succinct poetry. So good to see ya back...hope you submit something for the book ...wouldnt be pips with out ya  Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
not submitting. Thought about it but....I'm too lazy to go through the whole permission thing. But thanks, you made me feel happy. (It wouldn't be PIP without all of us) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Liz, I agree with Janet, you MUST submit, all you have to do is submit your favorite poem(s) and vote for others and you find a chance to get in the book, yay! (kiss on cheek) I too love the plains because of the simplicity and serenity they offer, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I love this one Wind. Yes, you must enter one for the book. You are a gifted young woman whose talent should not go unread. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
loved these words, you're incredibly gifted and i hope you reconsider entering a submission |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You transported me into another world and another time...my imagination took flight with your descriptive writing. I envisioned Mongols riding steppe ponies and clouds of churned up dust as they thundered across the plains... ~ A poem can take on a life of its own once the poet has set it free... Warm hugs, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-27-2003 09:25 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful imagery...love the new pic |
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