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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-02-27 07:18 PM



Here, in the darkeness
heartless, panic driven
making it with out
thoughts stand here
alone shattered
and splattered on the
ground, like thoughts
that beat on my brain,
like rain on a windowpane.
The mindless refuse
that contradicts my smile.
The selfishness,
left to contaminate my soul.
The spots of rot
the rhythem. Mediate the top
when my pain
stains.
When selfishness takes over
Its the mindless refuse
that contridicts my smile
thoughts, shattered and splattered
on the ground, like
rain beating on the window pain,
releasing the pain from my brain.

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-27 07:23 PM


I love the darkness of this poem. Sometimes I get in the mood from a dark poem. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-02-27 07:29 PM


Alrighty then...

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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