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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-02-27 06:27 PM


Departing


What more could I say?

then
with watering tears
words sprouted
into green leaves and stems

flowers bloomed
and fruit has grown ripe





©022703

(Enchantress - thanks for the idea)



© Copyright 2003 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-02-27 06:29 PM


now... that I like a great deal....

good stuff and well woven bit of wisdom in it as well...


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-27 06:31 PM


You are full of wisdom my friend and I like that.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie
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3 posted 2003-02-27 06:37 PM


Krawdad...yes, it happens this way.  Well done!
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-02-27 06:45 PM


Beautiful!
Margherita

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5 posted 2003-02-27 06:58 PM


Oh how beautiful!
And I am honored that my brief piece
may have inspired this in you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2003-02-28 12:41 PM


smoooch...i am soooooooooo happy to see you...h
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7 posted 2003-02-28 12:55 PM


Krawdad, I love the way you write..and the
font you used added to the words, too.
.
.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-02-28 04:09 AM


short and sweet...like it
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-02-28 09:03 AM


Very Wise words...

regards,
sudhir

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10 posted 2003-02-28 09:09 AM




(sigh) Oh E.J, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I always love your sentiments expressed in your writings! (big hugggsssss) Well-done, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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