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corey14
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0 posted 2003-02-27 05:10 PM


I don’t need it
Yet I yearn for it
And still I do
When I have it
Still no good
When I have it
I think about you
What ever I do you’re in my mind
Where ever I go
You will know
You are always in my thoughts
What ever I do
I can only think about you

I want to hold you
I want to have you
I should have told somebody
I love you
Do you love me?

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

i have one but i cant think of it

© Copyright 2003 corey baker - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-27 05:35 PM


This is powerful stuff. I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-02-27 06:43 PM


I like the rhythm of this lovely poem.
Margherita

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3 posted 2003-02-27 07:38 PM




(sigh) Oh Corey, with your golden heart she could never refuse your invitation, yay! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you deserve such true happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-28 04:46 AM


like this a lot
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