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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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~~~~ The easiest thing I have ever done Is to fall in love with you. No instructions had to be surveyed No parts to affix with glue. Mail-in rebate that takes so long Was absent from this deal. The one and only guarantee Was the rapture that I'd feel. I didn't have to practice poise Or to worry about my clothes. For in your eyes I was a lady fair Perfect from head to toes. Yes, falling in love was a simple task Because of your gallant heart. And the sincerety with which you promised me That we would never part. ~~~~ Chris Barker 2003 ~~~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This so reminds me of me and Liam. I love this.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
loner - I am glad you liked this. Thanks "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Chris... Seems your muse has awoken from her winter's nap.  Knowing you and who this was written for makes it all that more special... Give that Harley guy a hug for me okay? ~Luv and miss you, Teed~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-27-2003 05:05 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing simple but when you have all the pieces...? Flawless! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancylee - I sure hope my muse has awakened! Or perhaps it is a case of "early" spring fever I have been feeling. I know what you're thinking....hot flashes?!! Thanks sister of mine and I will make sure "you know who" gets a big hug. luv and miss ya! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - oh my, what a gracious compliment. Thankyou so much.  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Those are the best kind to have. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, with that kind of loving sincerity in a relationship, you surely shall never part. A fresh and very appealing read. Enjoy your evening! Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that was a great guarantee...*s nice work M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SmartChick - thankyou kind lady. Linda - your comments are always so lovely. Thankyou Maureen - I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
yes, there is always sincerity when promises are made .... when the hearts are full of love. A gentle song of quiet awareness that you will never part. Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Chris, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as finding a soft place to fall is the most beautiful way to fall in love! (kiss on cheek) I dream so much for this to happen for me too, sweet friend, this is majestic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Margherita - thankyou for your kind words. Noah - this will happen for you as well - be patient young man. Thankyou for you sweetness as always. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
It's easy to fall in love. But it's hard to fall out of love. Thanks for this. the Wind is invisible. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wind! Hello! Glad you dropped by and commented on my poem. Yes, it is hard to fall out of love - but that's the chance we take. Thanks for reading! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou passingshadows!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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