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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-02-27 04:16 PM


Forever
If all time stood still
Whenever we're together
"Forever" would be ours.


believe in what your heart feels...

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-27 04:20 PM


This is so beautiful. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-02-27 04:35 PM



You have a light touch!

Thanks for your note on Abby...
she's home now...I haven't seen her yet,
but I'm sure she's going to be fine after
some recuperation...

such a pet she'll have from me for you...

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3 posted 2003-02-27 04:36 PM


nicely done...and the gentle wish in it...one to relish


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-02-27 04:46 PM


Its hard to get past the IF...James
Etain
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5 posted 2003-02-27 04:48 PM


Few words sometimes say so much.
Beautiful!
Love,
Etain.

scorpio
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6 posted 2003-02-27 04:55 PM


Glad you liked it, Julie..

Glad to hear that Abbe is doing well... and thank you for your kind comments, Karilea..

Yes Ron...I do more than relish..I cherish the time with her..

James...I know what you mean..thanks..

Thank you Etain...Glad you enjoyed it

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-02-27 08:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Scorpio, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I absolutely love this, and may you and your love always hold onto the future lovingly, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-02-27 09:02 PM



Shhh, somewhere in time..
You and she will smile and say ~
"Forever," is here!



~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before. ~

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-02-27 09:16 PM


What a lovely thought...

Warm hugs,
EA

scorpio
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10 posted 2003-02-27 10:24 PM


Thank you, Noah...glad you  enjoyed it..

Nancy...I live for that magic moment...somewhere in time..

Linda...thank you for reading and commenting...much appreciated..

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2003-02-28 04:35 AM


yes!
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