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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-27 04:07 PM


Unbelievable

I crawl
to arms
deeper
than valleys
and breathe
air with
no mixture
and wonder
how can
this be


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-27 04:08 PM


Helen, once again you are perfect with the written word. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-27 08:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I guess because in love there is a whole new world that is hard to explain and express, yay, this is magical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-28 04:37 AM


intense and deep
Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-28 04:05 PM


Oh wow...this makes me catch my breath.
Eric

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