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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-27 04:05 PM


I can picture your brown eyes
How you can smile
Tell how you feel
And tell people when you hurt
With them

And your half smile
How your so worried
People would make fun of your teeth
Because there not exactly straight
But you shouldn't worry
About that
Because nobody will ever be
Perfect

And the way you laugh
Makes the people around you
Want to join in your
Laughter

And the soft way you speak
Would soothe
Any womans soul
And make her calm
And relaxed

And everytime I think of you
All I can say
(It might sound like a valley girl.
But who really cares.)
Like I love you

Cold hands means a warm heart

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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2003-02-27 04:43 PM


Loner...I hope he gets the message!

INclan

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
2 posted 2003-02-27 04:46 PM


Like I like this...very nice indeed..

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2003-02-27 08:20 PM




(smiles) Oh Julie, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is bound to melt your loves heart and touch him deeply! (big hugggssss) He loves you like you love him, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
4 posted 2003-02-27 10:33 PM


He sounds *perfect*



~Dark~

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2003-02-27 10:34 PM


I love you too Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-02-28 04:29 AM


cute one
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