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Leaning toward the left
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Leaning toward the left |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I looked for it today, the right side of my brain checked all the old addresses, wiped dust off degrees where dated signatures swore to its existence ‘True’, I spoke, as if in apology ‘I didn’t hear you leave’ hoping a feign of regret, a tear in my so lonely eye would cover the disinterest I felt quickly today while looking for the right side of my brain |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan, I'm seeming to lose all of my brain lately....  A very good write, friend...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
'True', I spoke, as if in apology 'I didn't hear you leave' ================================ Oh...you found it....trust me...you found it! ( oh and Dunc? you know what they say bout talking to yourself)   Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) now Duncan...disinterest? really? enjoyed the play of word and idea here... concerned a bit about the inspire... want to go grab a beer and talk about it? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
grab me one too Ron! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Order me a Quervo...hold the worm. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
that good huh Dunc? well bud... tell you what, I know this place over on 119th... or we can just get a bottle..and I'll drive... you sip and tell me all about it... cheers bud... to all the things that never were and all the things we are... to all the times we never had...and to all that left scars. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan...you may not have enjoyed your search, but I did.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'or we can just get a bottle..and I'll drive... you sip and tell me all about it... cheers bud... to all the things that never were and all the things we are... to all the times we never had...and to all that left scars.' Deal...how 'bout I write it? (Can I quote the cheer?) I figure that story is already getting stranger by the moment, why not go for it??  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bud...you can have the cheer... and write it... yeah you can write it..anytime... and I would... if you were closer do just that bud... drive while you sipped...and talked.. but then..you know I'd write it.. ( chuckling) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See what happens when you're inspired? You bring everyone out... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'but then..you know I'd write it..' I'd say race ya but we both know who would win! So I'll check in on Jackson, see if he feel like takin' a ride... |
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