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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2003-02-27 08:58 AM


If the words fell
From lips other than mine
And you caught them on the wind
I'd hope for you sunshine
And long gentle days
Of happiness spent with him

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1 posted 2003-02-27 09:00 AM



Cap'n...

this is about as short...
and as tenderly sweet,
as I have seen you write...

ever...

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2 posted 2003-02-27 09:04 AM


Not one word wasted Captain..
Perfectly penned and very much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-02-27 09:07 AM


Capt. Ron, now that is what "Love" really is...to love someone else more than self...
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Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-02-27 09:16 AM


sometimes the fewest amount of words speak the loudest :-)

Bravo!

HUGGLES

KS

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5 posted 2003-02-27 09:18 AM




(sigh) Oh Ron, this is such a wonderful pledge, sweet friend, I too desire just the same as I want to wrap the words in cashmere smiles and faith for my loved ones! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-27 09:24 AM


It's a true act of love to wish happiness to someone who has found love with another...poignant words Ron..

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-02-27 09:54 AM


Ron...The feelings touched on in this, stated so simply, have much impact.  Well done!  
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8 posted 2003-02-27 10:37 AM




Yes, I understand this and wrote one at Christmastime, similar in message, admittedly, I fibbed a tiny bit...but, for the most part, meant it.


This is the highest form of love.



Enjoyed, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"


[This message has been edited by regards2you (02-27-2003 01:19 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-02-27 10:57 AM


If the words fell
From lips other than mine
And you caught them on the wind
========================================

*SIGH*


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10 posted 2003-02-27 11:11 AM


from a heart of truly profound love, though lips are mute to speak their truth

heart-wrenching

I wish you love

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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11 posted 2003-02-27 11:37 AM


And as long as 'him' refers to her dog, I agree!  
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12 posted 2003-02-27 01:15 PM


the mark of a man who loves a woman
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13 posted 2003-02-27 02:37 PM


This is very sweet, Capitan. Your moods
they are a-swinging, poetically speaking!

Core

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