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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-27 07:01 AM


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your heart
has ransomed me
and taught
my soul
to dance
redeemed with
the music
in which
you said
my name


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-27 08:05 AM


Simply beautiful.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-02-27 03:21 PM


nice...to hear music in another simply saying your name...

short..tight and complete... nicely done.

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-02-27 03:23 PM


Perfect Helen!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2003-02-27 03:43 PM


Helen
I say
Oh Helen

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5 posted 2003-02-27 08:29 PM




(smiles) Now that's a beautiful ransom! (big hugggssssss) This is so wonderfully whimsical, sweet friend, keep dancing that dance, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-27 08:30 PM


Hellen this is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krawdad
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7 posted 2003-02-28 12:05 PM


and with them you glide across these blue pages . . .
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-02-28 04:21 AM


very stirring
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