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beanbagtechnology
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0 posted 2003-02-27 04:32 AM



     "For you" by PDFarrell

           For me,,,and
           For you and,,,
           For you know who.  

           For your face & your hair,
           ,,and the smell of it.
           For everyone else,
           For us,,,for the hell of it.

           I`ve forgotten the rest,
           Reminds me of someone
           I used to sing silly things for.

           She made up my bed,
           Then she made all the strings
           on my silly heart sore.

           When I dream I still flow,
           Like wine between the Queens teeth.
           Fast asleep beneath her stopsign
           Eating humble pie
           off Elvis dishware and I`ll be there,
           Sick and picking spiders from your hair.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-27 04:34 AM


Welcome To Passions! I enjoyed this first post...looking forward to more.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-02-27 06:52 AM



Welcome to Passions!  Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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3 posted 2003-02-27 08:53 AM




(sigh) Wow, this is a stirring debut, sweet friend, I love the honesty and effort of this, well-done, yay! Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-27 08:55 AM


beanbagtechnology
Welcome and enjoyed.

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5 posted 2003-02-27 09:19 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your first post...
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Nan
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6 posted 2003-02-27 09:19 AM


I enjoyed it too... Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place to read, write, & enjoy...
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7 posted 2003-02-27 10:07 AM


Welcome to Passions!! Interesting first post. Have fun here! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-27 10:15 AM


Yes, it was an interesting first post.
I look forward to more of your work. And,


Hugs,
Ethel....garysgirl

beanbagtechnology
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9 posted 2003-02-27 12:39 PM


Ahhh, you are ALL very kind.
  Your warm words have touched my heart
   and allowed me to feel right at home
    here in your beautiful site...
     Thank you all!  I am looking forward
      to getting to know each of you
       (and me-self) much better.
                      Godspeed,
                           Peter

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