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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-27 04:19 AM


She Was Hot

I met her on a hot night in December.
It's always hot in Hawaii in December.
That's why so many mainlanders visit
in the middle of their winters.
They want some relief from the cold,
and the slush and the snow.
On this particular night no one was cold.
She was not...for I wanted her
kiss and thats what I got.
I can assure you that
she was hot.

JamesLee
February25
2003

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-28 04:02 PM


Sounds like quite a day!
Thanks.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-02-28 08:23 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, this does sound so beautiful, yay, and may such a beautiful fantasy come true forever for you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-02-28 08:27 PM


So warm and inviting....
makes me want to go back.

Nice title too!!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-02-28 09:24 PM


James - would she happen to have a warm sister?????????

BC

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-03-01 04:24 PM


shaking head, tisking
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
6 posted 2003-03-01 05:17 PM


Whew! it's getting hot in here.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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