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0 posted 2003-02-26 05:34 PM


Luke warm,
write luke warm words;
warm like Luke, hair on fire,
speaking in tongues at Pentecost!
Blazing!

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1 posted 2003-02-26 05:35 PM


Interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Hi, Loaner (oops, Loner).....

This one relates back to the other one I just put up, in case you haven't seen the rest of the discussion....

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3 posted 2003-02-26 05:47 PM


I guess he didn’t trust his feelings?
A cute play on words

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4 posted 2003-02-26 05:53 PM


Ed--The life of a mannequin is not easy.
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5 posted 2003-02-26 05:55 PM


(smiling)... enjoyed... and I think understood before I read the other...

nice bit of twist in making luke warm into something else...


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6 posted 2003-02-26 08:10 PM




(sigh) There is always a haunting premise behind the word "lukewarm", though there is light too and I believe in the end the truth comes out and it is usually for the better! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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