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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-26 04:00 PM



I Am But A Sigh …
~*Marge Tindal*~

I am but a sigh of soft-felt satisfaction
only a fraction … of all that I read
Caught in the web of worded adorn
a refraction of rhyme on poetic wings borne~

Only a sigh … through poetic phrase
all that you feel,touches me in amaze
Can you hear my breath exhaled in adore …
falling across the page … begging for more ?

Write me, poet … and dear poetess
nothing more than your thoughts,best-dressed
Nothing more will I ask of you …
than poetry to last my entire life through~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-26-2003 04:04 PM).]

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Charisma
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1 posted 2003-02-26 04:02 PM


Love your Poets thoughts.......YOU are poetry in every sigh...Thank you for your poetry treats dear Marge



Charisma

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2 posted 2003-02-26 04:06 PM


Talking about amazement or atonishment, you amaze me with every poem and replies you make. You have a good heart

~Every girl has a dream within.

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3 posted 2003-02-26 04:08 PM


what would the poet be without the reader?
nicely writ

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4 posted 2003-02-26 04:14 PM


Marge..I know how you feel...I'm the same way.
Some days just can't get enough..read..read..read.
This is lovely...much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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5 posted 2003-02-26 05:16 PM


Beautiful.
Eric

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6 posted 2003-02-26 05:17 PM


Beautifully written

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7 posted 2003-02-26 05:39 PM


Ok my friend, I will write for you. But, I think I have written alot you haven't read, yet. Marge, as usual, this is beautiful.
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8 posted 2003-02-26 06:52 PM


enjoy
Corinne
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9 posted 2003-02-26 08:01 PM


Sigh...this is beautiful, Marge!

Corinne

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10 posted 2003-02-27 02:01 AM



Marge~
Yep...sighing for sure.
This is so soft and beautiful...I love it.
Love and hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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11 posted 2003-02-27 04:19 AM


Beautifully written, indeed...

My regards,
sudhir

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12 posted 2003-02-27 02:53 PM



Sis, even when your bleu... you still write it well...

love and hugs, dale


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13 posted 2003-02-27 03:27 PM


Marge, very well said. Enjoyed dear friend... Marti

Dwelling on the negative simply
contributes to its power.   
Shirley MacLaine

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14 posted 2003-02-27 03:31 PM


Marge-sis...I will if you will!  
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15 posted 2003-02-27 03:54 PM


Dear Marge, you are a sigh MAKER! A grand dame of poetic expression! That you sit in awe of others, elevates my opinion of you even higher! To you I tip my "halo"--or whatever the dickens that thing is on top of my head! tehe

I am writing this just for you, Dear One:

Whene'er I read the words of ye
My thoughts give rise to their beauty
You write of life--its joys and wonder
You make me sigh and also ponder
I love to read your precious mots
They heal the spirit and mend the woes.

~ May your quill continue to thrill forever more! I have been missing you!

Linda

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16 posted 2003-02-27 04:19 PM


FriendsALL~
How very much I appreciate each word-thought that is *gifted* through your pens~
Always ... in all ways, I will enjoy reading the poetic variety of thoughts that come by way of The Circle~

My heart is so very apprecitive of you~
Charisma~
You are an angel !

LittleEliza~
Such a gentle soul you are .... thank you for touching me~

Krawdad~
Thank you for your thoughts~

Enchantress~
Isn't it awesome to be able to come here empty ... and exit so FULL ?
Thanks gal~

Ericc~
Thanks so much~

LonerGal~
Thanks very much~

SmartChick~
I know ... although I read, I've not all the time I used to have to reply.  Please know, I read !  When the doctor's get done with me this week .... I may well have either more time to reply .... or less .... who knows anymore ?
Keep writing gal~

VanDana~
And a thanks to you gal~

Corinne~
Thank you for dropping in on me.
Love your book submissions, poetess~

Vicky and Martie and Marti~  No better friends than you ... each loved for a myriad of reasons~

Sudhir~
Thank you dearest sir.
And I appreciate the e-mail .... I'll try to get to answering it soon.
Just let me say .... not this time around~

LUCKY~
I always appreciate knowing you've been in to read.  I'm soooooooooo far behind in my correspondence ... forgive me.
Just all tied up in legalities from my injury ... I'll get back around to being my self before you can believe it !
Honest Injun !

EarthAngel ... thank you~
Your comments are appreciated and your *gift* is saved for future reading pleasure~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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17 posted 2003-02-27 04:41 PM


Marge, I share you enjoyment. as to poetry to last you a lifetime....sounds good to me.

INclan

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18 posted 2003-02-27 04:51 PM


But I'd rather read the perfections that spill from YOUR quill! LOL

This is beautiful, Marge... and it's so very good to see your name again on these pages of blue. *S*

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19 posted 2003-02-27 06:16 PM


glad to see you back in such good form

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21 posted 2003-02-28 06:28 AM



And...she's back!

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22 posted 2003-02-28 06:36 AM


Welcome back your sweet soft sighs , I have always adored your poems and your equally caring replies


Hope

Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2003-03-17 01:57 PM


Inclan~
Thank you so much for dropping in on my *sigh*~
You were here the first night I joined this friendly circle ... nice to see you 'home'~

SweetSuthernGal~
And YOU are a heartfelt *sigh* ... waiting for a place to happen.
I'm glad you happened to me~

WynterGal~
Thankee kindly~

DixieGirl~
You're so kind to me~
Thank you~

Shiner~
Yeppers !
Thankee~

Hope~
Thank you ... what a very nice thing to say~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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