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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-26 03:55 PM


I miss you
feel you breathing in my ear
a step behind.

I miss you
never knew you
Only cries
Beneath that urine soaked
Bathroom sink prison

To Him you were Satan
To me only David

Remembering cowboys and Indians
Before Dad became God
stealing innocence away

He spiraled down
to madness
we were evil
you were Lucifer's son
Did God's will, He preached
I will always hear the screams
And smell urine
thinking of it.

I remember when you died
and I started
you screamed
He quieted you forever
In that big black suitcase
Like an unwanted piece of luggage
Smiling toward heaven
Throwing you in that Dumpster
dancing like a kid
parading through Kmart
Shouting proudly
"I killed the devil!"

I miss you!
too young
To handle the funeral
Never had the chance to cry
So I have ever since

I miss you
never knew you
I hear you breathing in my ear
One step behind
Haunting forever
Keeping your painful memory
Alive.

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (02-26-2003 03:58 PM).]

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-02-26 04:09 PM


This was extremely sad. That is all I will say except, very, very well done.

Susan

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2 posted 2003-02-26 04:10 PM


Thank you for reading. I know this is one of those hard things to respond to
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3 posted 2003-02-26 04:27 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh David, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, my heart cries out to your loss but know he will never forget you and will always love you! (wipes tears) I send healing hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-02-26 05:09 PM


thank you
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