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0 posted 2003-02-26 02:39 PM


Shock me,
send the arc blast,
give all your current now,
life wires, not trickling milliamps.
Shock me!

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-26 05:18 PM


Wow...this is striking.
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2 posted 2003-02-26 05:19 PM


I defiently like this one.

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3 posted 2003-02-26 05:23 PM


I've had queries about this one..... this morning I was sitting in an OSHA training class called Electrical Awareness, and those three things (shock-arc-blast) were listed as the dangers of high voltage.... I started playing with 'em to keep from falling asleep (since I've TAUGHT that class before)... The result sounded kinda nifty, so I decided to post it.....

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4 posted 2003-02-26 05:25 PM


all righty then....
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5 posted 2003-02-26 05:29 PM


*burrrzzzzggt*
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6 posted 2003-02-26 05:32 PM


.......and one of the mannequin "victims" in their video had his hair set on fire by the arcin' and blastin'..... I go post what that one gave me too, wat the heck....

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7 posted 2003-02-26 05:59 PM


(laughing)...

now ed... it is obvious to me I did not understand the inspiration for the second one..and made out of it something else..

ennjoyed this and the chuckle it gave me reading the replies...


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8 posted 2003-02-26 06:03 PM


Hi, Cpat.....

Yep, sometimes I just play with words for the sheer joy of it.

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9 posted 2003-02-26 08:13 PM




(sigh) Wow, your amplified heart sure sends a current in this one, this is super-charged with emotion, I love it, this is more intense than AC/DC, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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