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Afraid of the dark
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Afraid of the dark |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Minions of darkness feed on twisted sadist desire on many a dim lit eve I feel the darkness thick probing inside violating The voices once imagined silent now scream in rage breaking dilluted fantasy and daydream Feel the chill crawling up your spine the hair standing up as cold night wind blows Your fear feeds your prison locked inside your mind afraid of the deamons that may lurk just outside When did the sun die? Good and evil once dichotomy now in bed with blasmpemous throes of ectasy spawning infants of ingnorrance to plague shallow minds As I walk the night I see things I shouldn't see but as day comes I realize they never leave only run to shadow behing my vacant eyes. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I see too |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"When did the sun die? Good and evil once dichotomy now in bed with blasmpemous throes of ectasy spawning infants of ingnorrance to plague shallow minds" You never cease to amaze me. The entire piece, especially the lines above, blew me away. Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) You know, the way you described good and evil merging and spawning those shadowed infants really got to me, I never thought of it like that before but it truly feels like that but the kids are immediately obfuscated and just solitary shadows and tat feeling sends a shiver up my spine! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, I too hate the dark and that is why I usually get to bed late after midnight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-26-2003 01:24 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I don't think this got the amount of responses it so deserves. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Why thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sleep with one eye open, i think, tonight enjoyed........... |
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