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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-26 12:39 PM



Banquet

you are
a feast
for the mind
do pardon
my manners
as I lick
my fingers

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-02-26 12:42 PM


what a concept!
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-26 12:42 PM


suI like htis one. Slyly sensual
Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-02-26 04:44 PM


hmmmm
Krawdad
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4 posted 2003-02-26 04:53 PM


mmmmmmmm
tasty!
love this !

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-02-26 05:15 PM


Beautiful and sensual.
Eric

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6 posted 2003-02-26 05:18 PM


Whoa!!! I love this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

That Voice
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7 posted 2003-02-26 05:41 PM


I like this poem of yours,
makes good images


Feast on thy lips
As my mind slips
Over and over
Over you


makes me think of this line
and is a good start for a poem.

Feast on thy lips, as my mind slips
Over and over, over you
Thoughts lingers, like my fingers
Touching and touching, touching you

TV

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8 posted 2003-02-26 05:57 PM


NO.. you can't go dipping your fingers into my mind..( laughing)... you'll mess things up in there and i have enough trouble keeping it straight as it is!!!!

very nicely done as usual.. and I see the hint of sensual in this is not lost on anyone...

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9 posted 2003-02-26 08:21 PM




(sigh) This is softly sensual, sweet friend, I love the feel of this poem, yay, we all love you so much, it's finger-lickin' good! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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