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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-26 12:35 PM


Unknotted

when I
am undone
you
take strings
and tie them
loop and over
sliding under
creating beauty


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-26 12:41 PM


nice
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-26 12:44 PM


always thought-provoking
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3 posted 2003-02-26 06:04 PM


nicely done... I enjoyed

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-02-26 06:06 PM


Oooh yess....so nice.
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5 posted 2003-02-26 08:22 PM




(sigh) This is just gorgeous, sweet friend, you always weave so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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