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0 posted 2003-02-26 09:07 AM


~~~~
When she gave to him her heart
she gave everything she had
her all

Some know not any other way
loving with their whole being
their all

Holding nothing back
when sharing themselves
with another

They share their minds, their bodies
their spirits
their all

Just as I with you
and you with me

When we gave to each other
our hearts
~~~~





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-26-2003 04:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-26 09:13 AM


The world would be a much happier place if everyone received the love in return that they gave from their heart.

Very true and loving words, Dear Ethel,

Loving hugs from my heart to yours,

Linda

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2 posted 2003-02-26 09:16 AM


So far in life this has been my downfall.  I am glad to see it sometimes works the way it should.  

Susan

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3 posted 2003-02-26 09:19 AM


So true, Linda. There would be a lot
leass hearts broken, wouldn't it?
Thanks for the heart hugs, friend.
Heart Hugs to you, too...
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-02-26 09:22 AM


Susan, there have been times in my
life that I've been very hurt from
giving my all. But, I know no other
way. I guess I learned this from my parents.
Their's has worked for many years, though.
Thanks, friend....
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-02-26 10:05 AM


Ethel - sometimes we just have to take that chance and give our all. Sometimes love is given back - what a blessing! Well done, hugs to you, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-02-26 10:08 AM



Ethel,

And I remain so happy for you.
So pleasant to know it can happen.


Hugs,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2003-02-26 10:09 AM


Beautifully written!
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8 posted 2003-02-26 10:41 AM


I like this!
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9 posted 2003-02-26 12:59 PM


and once that happens, you can never get it back
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10 posted 2003-02-26 01:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, I agree with all my heart, I gave all the love in my heart to Joanna because she was so special to me but I guess she didn't give it in return and that breaks my heart as I hope I may find someone who can give me an equal share! (sad sigh) I don't mean to sound greedy but I try and be the best love I can be and I wish I could find love like that soon, I'm starting to feel love just isn't for me! (sigh) This is a gorgeous write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2003-02-26 03:56 PM


All the way, is the only way...
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12 posted 2003-02-26 05:18 PM


A beautiful desription of a loving relationship.
Thank you,
Eric

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13 posted 2003-02-26 05:42 PM


Ethel, this is beautiful, as usual.
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14 posted 2003-02-26 06:52 PM


nice
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15 posted 2003-02-27 11:58 AM


Ethel Mae, missed you, as usual.

This poem touches and explains a lot to me.
It is the way i love, and u know, for a while, i was scared to carry on doing so recently, so openly, so fully. But you reinforce my realisation, its the way i feel, and never to hold back the love i feel and want to give. you're a mentor babes. love can be soooo scary can't it? when u realise how much you do actually love and need someone.
this is going into my library friend.
loving u lots, gemma xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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16 posted 2003-02-27 03:00 PM


A perfect desire as long as the other feels the same...James
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