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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-02-26 07:29 AM


The Ride

We ride a horse named omnibus.
A horse of multipurpose plus
Horseshoes made of seven league youth
Nailed with nails of standard truth.

A brash and thriving force of spice
Ill aware of the payment price
Driven by a genesis flair
To ride the horse with youthful dare
  
And he rides into day and night
With out a clue, without a light.
And wars upon a field of mist
With hand and head and clench of fist.

He pays no heed the bells of toll
And waves a banner called his soul.
And will not heed the rivers rhyme
Nor the sands, of the sands of time

And though the echoes call to him
He rides in madness o’er the brim.


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-02-26 07:50 AM


Sy...I always know I am in for a treat and a bit of wisdom when I open one of your offerings.. this is no exception
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2 posted 2003-02-26 08:57 AM


Seymour, yes, your poems are such a treat every morning...
Thank, Sir....
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Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-02-26 08:59 AM


"Horseshoes made of seven league youth
Nailed with nails of standard truth."

Wow.  Susan


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4 posted 2003-02-26 09:07 AM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is sounds like such a wonderful new knight, sweet friend, I hope you write amore about him as this can be the start of an all-new odyssey or saga! (big hugggsssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-26 09:21 AM


Wonderful morning read Sy...much enjoyed.
~Morning hugs & tea~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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6 posted 2003-02-26 09:55 AM


Oh, my, this ride made me breathless!! Wonderful. Orange marmalade with your toast this morning? hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-02-26 10:21 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.

Now, you would be a horse that I would love to ride! Ooops! I don't think that came out right! (Is Isabel nearby?*?) tehe

I'd grab onto your mane (or what's left of it! tehe) and we could travel the world 'round, conquering all!--and do invite Randy along! A good dragon could come in very handy when we're fighting the bad ones!

Have a wonderful day!
EA

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-02-26 10:28 AM


Cpat,
Thank you my friend.

Ethel,


Susan,
Thank you for the WOW.

Noah,
Perhaps

Nancy,
Thank you and hugs back.

Chris,
Thank you dear,

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9 posted 2003-02-26 10:29 AM


Excellent sy
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-02-26 10:30 AM


Earth Angel
You have a delightful mind.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-02-26 10:31 AM


Aenimal
Thank you my friend.

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12 posted 2003-02-26 10:35 AM


a fresh cup of coffee and Sy...no better way to start the day!

Rf

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13 posted 2003-02-26 10:37 AM



Don't forget to come pick me up, Sy...

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-02-26 10:52 AM


Robert,
Sounds good to me.

Sunshine,
You are one of my perminant guests.

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15 posted 2003-02-26 11:43 AM


We ride a horse named omnibus.
A horse of multipurpose plus
Horseshoes made of seven league youth
Nailed with nails of standard truth.

=============================

and those will be my WAAAAY COOL lines for the day...
clever clever clever -- YOU ARE!!  


Some of us ride horses...and some ride dragons.

*ww*


Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin,
there's a need to be separate and a need to be one ...
it's struggle neither wins.


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Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-02-26 01:24 PM


JM,
And some ride moths. WWRS

passing shadows
Thank you

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18 posted 2003-02-26 07:03 PM


loved it
Martie
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19 posted 2003-02-26 07:09 PM


Sy...I just like to ride your poetry.  
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-02-26 09:32 PM


Thank you vandana

Martie,
You can ride my poetry anytime.

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21 posted 2003-02-27 02:03 AM



Sy~
I'm smiling and loving this.
Wonderful, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-02-27 07:46 AM


vlraynes
Thank you for the smile.

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