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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-02-26 01:52 AM


"I have time for just one more" he said.
And that's when I knew that he read
the one I wrote for his eyes to see,
the one I wrote with such intensity,
to swallow him up inside of me
so he'd never have to be
alone again.
Yep, that's when he said
he still had time
for one more.
So I gave him two,
for good measure.
Cooking is fun.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-26 02:41 AM


lol...this is neat
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2 posted 2003-02-26 02:08 PM


Thanks, shadowygal.
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3 posted 2003-02-26 03:55 PM


Very nice.   Thanks Kacy,

Saludos,

Blanca & Monzy

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4 posted 2003-02-26 04:22 PM




(smiles) I think if you ask politely, even more might be made, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is cute, sweet friend, what a delicious treat, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-26 04:31 PM


MidniteSun~
Totally delight ... glad I had 'time for just one more'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2003-02-26 05:15 PM


Wonderful!
Eric

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7 posted 2003-02-26 06:20 PM


THANKS! to each of you.
Blanca and Monzy what a nice surprise!

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8 posted 2003-02-26 06:56 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-02-26 08:10 PM


Is it impolite to beg?
May I please have one more??!!


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10 posted 2003-02-26 08:12 PM


Thanks, Vandana.
Albert? LOL, I'll write one soon, just for you.

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11 posted 2003-02-27 03:48 AM


to swallow him up inside of me
so he'd never have to be
alone again.

good lines! i want to be enveloped within someone's love too

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