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Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

0 posted 2003-02-25 11:01 PM

Within a pause
I drink out the sweetness
of your love.
Like musk, our breath merges
unafraid,
and gazing endlessly
with tearfull eyes
wigned lips surrender
to feel just a last touch.

How intensely,
-Sublime... so sublime...-
Thirsty lovers sing.
How tempting,
from lips to tongues
communion is born
and into a holy kiss
the extension of their souls.

Etain.

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

1 posted 2003-02-25 11:03 PM

Etain,

Welcome! What a nice, languid first post. I love the image of the holy communion--the kiss... drawing together on several different levels.

Thank you for sharing this,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-25 11:04 PM

I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-25 11:06 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

4 posted 2003-02-25 11:21 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome friends of the poetry.
My greetings and smiles.
Love,
Etain.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-02-25 11:33 PM

A kiss is just that, an extension of ones self, and the merging of feelings with another.

So softly spoken.

Welcome Etain~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-02-26 12:01 PM

Communion -- yes, that's it exactly, on every level.....

A potent first post!

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-02-26 12:22 PM

Welcome to this passionate home, where communion is possible on many levels.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

8 posted 2003-02-26 02:45 AM

wonderful debut. quite passionate if you'll pardon the pun. i will look out for more.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-02-26 02:45 AM

intense! Welcome to Passions!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

10 posted 2003-02-26 03:11 AM

Enjoyed your first poem.....

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-02-26 06:28 AM

Welcome to Passions, Etain!
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-02-26 08:34 AM

Etain, welcome. I enjoyed your first
post and hope to read more of you.
Hugs from
Ethel....garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-26-2003 08:34 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-02-26 08:39 AM

Welcome! Glad to make your acquaintance! Your poem has my lips all puckered and rarin' to go! I really enjoyed this! Sounds to me like you really know how to smooch--and write!

~ May your kisses always be dewy and never run dry...

Warm welcoming hugs,

Earth Angel

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2003-02-26 08:49 AM

Welcome, and this was great! I can't wait to read more.

Susan

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

15 posted 2003-02-26 10:02 AM

Welcome to Passions Etain !!
Enjoyed your first post.

Have fun here! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

16 posted 2003-02-26 02:32 PM

(smiles) Oh Etain, this is a breathtaking debut sweet friend, such sublime smiles and romance fill the waltz of your words, may this kiss always deeply touch your heart, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Etain, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Etain, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

17 posted 2003-02-27 05:05 PM

Thank you for this welcome,
a warm place to stay and share
our wigned words.
Love,
Etain.

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