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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-02-25 10:42 PM


I suppose that this
was meant to be
a flash of news
and perhaps
my deadpan tone
betrayed me in
expectancy
of this breaking development
as I mocked
my relief
(gagging laughter)
disbelief
say it ain't so,
this just can't be...

nodding
"yes, I understand"
glad that she could not see
the evil grin upon my face.

Why certainly.
some other time
I know, I know.
it's such a shame...
hating my part in the game--

"Yes" I said,
"perhaps next week."
choking on absurdity
knowing that oh-yes-indeed,
we shall do this another time--

Maybe just to change the scene?
Next time, I just might even dress.

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-25 10:46 PM


This is beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Balladeer
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2 posted 2003-02-25 11:06 PM


*evil smirk* Don't go out of your way....
Duncan
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3 posted 2003-02-25 11:27 PM


Grateful at the moment, for my own take on this...
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-02-26 12:29 PM


My take is totally gutter bound but I'll take the image happily
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-02-26 02:54 AM


giggling
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-03-17 04:55 AM


I forgot I even wrote this one--

EGADS, but I'm bitchy...
lol...

thank you (wethinks)

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-03-17 01:51 PM


heheheheh - much too much you creep into my thoughts . . . liked this much - xxoo

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8 posted 2003-03-17 01:56 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-03-17 03:37 PM

















(giggles) Oh, you'll be coming back alright, it ain't over till it's over like Xena says! (big hugggsssssss) I love the playfulness of this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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