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Moon Less Evening Shade
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Moon Less Evening Shade |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Moon Less Evening Shade Now, I wander, having played with thought and twine having encompassed what is not mine, moon less wander, evening’s shade, skies in cover, stars evade… will it rain me snow on high, or cover me with ice in cry I but be a poet, weak engaged in thought of quiet speak beat I no drum, but still, I seek the truth, the truth would I beseech, the truth, the truth, is it in reach? I come to a quandary, and its fade, and jade, the color green, is what I encounter day by day and envy is its other name or so, a poet would say… understood, no, I am not, but not by my own consent, for I would understood then be, but how many limbs be bent? This responsible person in me should grasp the say carpe diem and hold it all the way letting me understand those who, not me, those whose grasp is less my own as I, in quiet, be, less more my thoughts before I speak, less evil become my tongue, I seek an answer, swift, to me, as I seek it, rung, by rung… find me now backbone of heaven break me bread if it unleavened, salt my soul if wounds would bleed and in quandary, find lemons in need… as I would gather me quiet in this moon less evening shade… [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-25-2003 09:34 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was captivating. I loved that poem, it was full of thoughs and wisdom. (Is that a new picture?) the Wind is invisible. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...much enjoyed the late night read. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written my friend.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
This is so beautiful and hertfelt, I am enjoying so much my first visit. Love, Etain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the new pic...and the write too! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Very nice sunshine, I really like the lines, "I but be a poet, weak engaged in thought of quiet speak" two thumbs Got the "e" from Ron and it seems to be working. It was strange, I did it right but he said it could have just been the server's fault... thanks so much again... lucky dale Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
i admire your courage in sharing such a gripping, personal conversation. your honesty is a light in the dark. Rf |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Wonderful write and as for the truth, only you could find that.  |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
Skies in cover stars evade.....what a lovely line... This poem reads like a prayer.....in truth what is the truth? I enjoyed this much... Golden* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You knocked me off my chair with this one---and I'm typing my reply from the floor!!! Gadzooks, you just blow me away, Dear poetess! It may be awhile before I can fly again, for my wings have sustained some damage in my fall...but the read was worth it! Warm hugs (but careful ones as the wings are a bit tender) Earth Angel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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